In response of this prompt.
‘Aren’t you proud of what you’ve done?’
I looked down to the iced Americano on the table, not being able to answer. From my point of view nothing seemed to go well by that time. Chaos, mess, and disorder – much like the traffic outside the coffeeshop we were in – he had done an excellent job pointing them out in every single thing I have conducted so far. No reason to say yes here.
An honest reply almost rolled out of my tongue when he continued. ‘For me, I’m proud of you.’
I looked up instantly.
‘Really,’ he quickly added.
…well that’s a first.
A rather surprising moment if I thought about it, but it wasn’t really something you hear often from anyone (excluding family members who will probably say that even when you pour H2SO4 over their flowerbed in the name of science).
Have you had it?
The time when someone set aside your flaws for a second, recap all the efforts and changes you have made throughout the times, and take a moment to say it out loud?
For me, luckily enough, I have.
He was my mentor, so I’ve been telling myself it’s probably just for the sake of keeping me from quitting.
Never had the guts to ask whether he meant what he said.
Nope. Not ready for it.
Later, maybe, if I reached a day when I don’t have to see him regularly anymore. Or if I got drunk enough. But not now. Definitely not now.
For now, I’m just going to bask in this assumption and do what I can do with what I have.
PS. if you had said that to someone else before, bless you
PPS. if by any chance you’re my mentor who stumbled upon this page and somehow found out this is me, let’s pretend this post doesn’t exist
In response to The Daily Post’s writing prompt: “Inspiration.”
In response to The Daily Post’s writing prompt: “Muse.”
In response to The Daily Post’s writing prompt: “Off-Season.”
In response to The Daily Post’s photo challenge: “Broken.”
In response to The Daily Post’s writing prompt: “Impossibility.”
A collection of re-written mini stories I heard / read from someone else / somewhere else. Feel free to claim if it’s originally yours. Unless the one I made. Feel free to guess which one is.
Will add more when I find a good one.
Especially the ones that makes you go “NOPE.”
…or just a “No. Way.”
‘I can’t sleep,’ she said, climbing into my bed.
I woke up the next morning holding the dress she’s buried in.
In the last 10 years I’ve lived in this house,
I have closed more doors than I’ve opened.
Seek for the monsters.
Under your bed,
in the closet,
behind the bushes,
but never look up.
It doesn’t like to be seen.
4. Girl, Interrupted
My daughter couldn’t stop screaming every night.
Not even after I told her it was only a nightmare from the gravestone
5. First date
‘Don’t say that,’ he laughed, ‘I have the heart of a little boy.’
Little did she know that he kept it in a jar on his desk.